Matt, there’s such a great sense of momentum here, “break out, freak out, snake out, slither” practically moves on its own. And landing on “Schism” as the final beat was a smart choice, it reframes all that chaos as something splitting apart rather than just noise. Really dynamic piece.
Matt, there’s such a great sense of momentum here, “break out, freak out, snake out, slither” practically moves on its own. And landing on “Schism” as the final beat was a smart choice, it reframes all that chaos as something splitting apart rather than just noise. Really dynamic piece.
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Thanks for your feedback and compliments! Glad you liked it.
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’Le freak – c’est chic!’ Love it Matt 🙌
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Thanks! Glad you like it!
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Matt, I love how “freak out” and “break out” build a wild beat before “Schism” brings it to a sudden stop!
~David
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Thanks! Glad you like it
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I really liked this cinquain with the feel of a rap!
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Thanks. I think i had more metal in mind than rap, but some metal uses rap so yea that works lol
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I went back and read it with a different frame of reference, and I get the metal in there. I think you are right there is a cross over.
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hi, Matt❣️
Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by our beloved Destiny, is live until Monday, October 12:
Much love, David
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