The concurrent voices rose in ominous chorus
Oh scrudge my face up from its lionesque stonework
First ya tek ya posies and ya put ’em in ya beaklet
I hast been ‘ere etnero lungful o’ woe
Then ya tek ya eyelets and ya wipe away the mist so ya can see from ’em
There ne’er was much ado about the greylings and how they tied thier tongues to the shambled shailings
And when a ring o’ roses grow
From ya eyes to ya elbow
I bunkem up the shailings and the dwellings speak the lingo of the flaylings
Then ya scream into the fire and…
And the whirl turned on its axel, precrius on its spindle
Ashes, ashes
we all fall down for the reapin’
And the seasons passed on the leavlings who posessed no choir for the ‘earing
Written for W3
Inspired by the rhyme ring a ring o’ roses and a previous W3 challenge.

Matt – you brilliantly weave the innocent imagery of children’s nursery rhymes with a gritty, dialect and apocalyptic themes – a haunting modern folk-gothic – a great piece👏
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Wow! Well done!
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A delight!
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Very creative take on the prompt. I liked it.
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You’re welcome.
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hi, Matt❣️
Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by our beloved Artie, is now live until Monday:
Much love, David
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I love how your poem creates a strange chorus of voices that feels like an old nursery rhyme drifting through a dream, full of invented words and mystery. 🌙
~David
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Thanks! I’d been noting down random made up words in my head and stuff recently and finally found an outlet for some of them. Lol
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🙃
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