W3: I tried to hide in a cup

I tried to hide in a cup
foldin’ mesel’ into a spoonful
borrowing me downs from me ups
I tried to hide in a cup
It’s safe to say I looked a reet mug
I was half empty, full
I tried to hide in a cup
foldin’ mesel’ into a spoonful


This was written for W3

17 thoughts on “W3: I tried to hide in a cup

    • Matt's avatar Matt Oct 24, 2025 / 11:03 am

      Yes and I have grown up around a few different variations of northen accents and they like to come out in my writing sometimes. Lol i find i become more creative the more i lean into my dads side of the familys accent i dont know why. Lol

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    • Matt's avatar Matt Oct 26, 2025 / 12:35 pm

      Lol. Thats why i like leaning into that dialect when writing.

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    • Matt's avatar Matt Oct 26, 2025 / 12:33 pm

      Nah, I hate tea. I have had (unserious) debates with people that brits keep lying about their love of tea because no one can like that stuff and i’m the only brit willing to admit its awful. Its a conspiracy, i tell you!

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      • murisopsis's avatar murisopsis Oct 26, 2025 / 1:15 pm

        My father was a big tea drinker – I think it tastes like dirty dish water! The only “tea” I can stomach is Chai made with milk and that isn’t one I drink anymore since I don’t do caffeine…

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  1. Sarah W's avatar Sarah W Oct 26, 2025 / 8:27 am

    A humorous and relatable take on the prompt. Nicely done 👏🏻

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  2. ben Alexander's avatar ben Alexander Oct 28, 2025 / 4:02 pm

    I love the playfulness in “foldin’ mesel’ into a spoonful” — it feels both whimsical and quietly sad at once. This triolet really draws me in, Matt.

    ~David

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  3. lesleyscoble's avatar lesleyscoble Oct 29, 2025 / 7:17 am

    I love tea, Matt—and drink it all the time. 😊 I enjoyed your triolet in poetic dialect.

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