Silence
rings hollow
explosive
in the crisped hush
whispered in our –
blushing ears
–
Crushing crescendo
a round of –
applause
clapping against windows
in between
muted secrecy
Author’s Note:
This is written for W3
Silence
rings hollow
explosive
in the crisped hush
whispered in our –
blushing ears
–
Crushing crescendo
a round of –
applause
clapping against windows
in between
muted secrecy
Author’s Note:
This is written for W3
Your silence is so loud, interestingly written this way
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I find there is no such thing as true silence. Silence usually has a sound i guess this is my attempt at portraying that idea of silence. Thanks.
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Very enigmatic! Had to read it twice to decipher… well done!
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Thanks!
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Matt, I feel like your “crushing crescendo” turning into “applause clapping against windows” captures silence as something alive and shifting—really striking!
~David
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The silence rising to the applause is a nice contrast.
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Thanks!
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